The way of a mockingbird
Is a beautiful song.
The way of a cat
Is a loud whining and howling.
The way of a rooster
Is its crow.
The mane in a lion
Captures the eyes of a lioness.
The fragrance of a flower
Is an assault on the senses.
The lovely sway
Of a woman's arms and hips,
Catches the eyes of a man.
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant expression! You have very passionately expressed theme in a very alluring way! My favorite lines: The mane in a lion/Captures the eyes of a lioness/.The fragrance of a flower/Is an assault on the senses...A fascinating piece of work Rose! I vote this poem with a 10
I try to always remember that the most beautiful things are found inside a person but even and old man can be enticed to look. However, I think I look for the eyes and a smile first. A delightful poem. Thank you.
Brilliant observation.........thank u, dear poetess........anjandev roy.
Very well said. The attraction depends on the effects on the sense organs. Mind is the deciding factor. Everything in Nature is unique, attractive in its own way. An imaginative write. Excellent thinking power behind its creation.10+
Analogy drawn in the read and the sway of lady that catches the eyes of man is explicit!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wooowww.... Such a lovely poem, Rose.....a full 10++++
Thank you so much, Bernard for taking time to read my poem. Your nice comments uplift the mind to articulate more.