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His Pain Our Salvation

Rating: 4.5
Why does the world cancel out the true GOD of all gods and deny the true belief

Sure he has borne our grieves

We sought the world and found nothing but darkness; we live a life ruled by a lying pharaoh

Our sins are massively wicked and causes us to be painful while the ONE and ONLY carried out our sorrows

In vain we worship and claim His KINGDOM, in shame we deny His sacrifice and broke HIS covenants then we all esteemed HIM stricken
The corruption of this world is in danger and we all are in fault for not being cautious
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Marieta Maglas 04 August 2010
Only Jesus Christ can save us..wonderful faith...well expressed poem...God bless...Mari
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Lynn Glover 05 July 2010
To off set all the bad things mentioned in the poem, we must except Him as our savior, then ask His forgiveness and follow Him. that's What He wants. A good write. Lynn
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I don't quite know how to comment on the content of this religious poem. I can only say that your religious doctrine is quite evidence in this poem but due to the dogmatic implications the poem presents, I love your flow of word. Keep writing...that's what we poets do.
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Valeria Montanez 25 June 2010
gr8 poem...keep writing...this is da way god wants to use you...preach(: ...lots of love..god bless you
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Excellent evangelistic expressions my friend.
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Summer Holst 19 June 2010
I can't say much spiritual wise but poetic wise this was amazing. you wrote with true feeling on this subject and i have to admit it was very good :) i cant wait to read more of you poems. Summer
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 14 June 2010
Overall this was well written, and this line 'A world of believers of evil and creators of felonies all combusted in flames of fantasies of hatred' took me on a downward spiral my favorite line
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Gregory, you are truly writing by the inspiration of the Holy Spirit. This is the Spirit of prophecy. Continue to stay open to Him, be Spirit led. God Bless. Love D
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CRACK HEAD 08 June 2010
My HEAVENLY FATHER smitten and afflicted, the tears of blood and the lashes of gold -this is my favorite part. i totally agree w/this poem. n fact i knw sumone who does not believe n God&tries to make me turn away from him, but when i asked that person to define love he immediately went to the Bible. i find it funny how the world thinks nothing of God until something is bad.
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Preetam Shetty 08 June 2010
He was bruised for our iniquities; we were freed for HIS pleasure and righteousness -- Great Write my friend i agree we do not value the worth of his sufferings
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