His Story Poem by Akhtar Jawad

His Story

Rating: 5.0


His story when narrated by crawling cockroaches
The moody king enjoyed their funny approaches
Lost a game of golf
When his mood was off
He hit the ball on his coach's crotches.

His Story
Monday, May 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: helpless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 14 May 2018

Did Donald Trump inspire this? : -)

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Akhtar Jawad 14 May 2018

Dear Friend, it's a wide open poem, but I don't want to be tried for blasphemy. I don't want my name to be included in the list of missing persons. I am trying to breath in a society of suffocation! .

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A fascinating poem. Ouch...for the coach. Funny write. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rini Shibu 14 May 2018

An interesting story, enjoyed

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Khalid Saifullah 14 May 2018

So the coach was purchased by the bookies and he became satanic in his duty of coaching, I am sorry for the innocent king.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

Inspired by Akhtar Jawad's limerick, I promised five days ago that I too would like to try my hand writing one. Happy to say, I've posted my first limerick today, titled: Limerick-1: Railway Minister's Freak. Readers are invited to read mine too and comment please.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 May 2018

This is quite humoristingly interesting the guy would change the helper and would another day hit some one elses balls inn his crotches all will feel happy he felt theirs sir u poetry is all about inner affairs lol

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

This limerick deserves 10/10. I've rated it so!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

A wonderful limerick! Enjoyed the comments of Valsa, Kelly and Rose Marie. I am feeling inspired to write a few limericks after reading this piece of yours. Let me try in a few days!

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Valsa George 14 May 2018

Hope no permanent damage is done! Poor coach!

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