~ Holy Milk ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Ms. Nivedita
16 February 2010.

Cyclic weeping
Love flowething
Thro’ virgin breast
O’ Holy Milk
Who made it happen
Fracturing fragrance of trust?

O’ Fille
Punishment of
Dwarfing forgiveness
Give why?

O’ breast feel jamboree
Nip inertia embarrassment.

From gentled breast
Deliver deathless lovehope
Share him hear
Vouched euphonic motherhood
Spilling relentlessly! Ooohing!

Mete mansion for
Beau’s face
In sousing tear
Assign you dear
Unborn to honor
As riches from love
Not lurid lust.

‘Tis Sanctifier.

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Comments about ~ Holy Milk ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/9/2017 5:08:00 PM)

    Womanhood, motherhood,
    virginity, holy breasts
    and holy milk. Very good poem and thought provoking.. tony
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  • (11/4/2011 5:48:00 AM)

    Love from the breasts perspective. (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2010 8:33:00 AM)

    A poem full of symbols, though too much abstraction is there still poem is good. (Report) Reply

  • Shihabudheen K J (12/7/2010 12:34:00 AM)

    Virgin breast is a symbol of chastity endowed with adorable women reflecting unimaginable flow of fathomless her holy milk.great poem. Great poet, please feel to read any one of my poem and comment like 'children of iraq'. (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2010 11:11:00 AM)

    A thought provoking read. Symbollic of the purity of womanhood and motherhood.
    Deep content, well expressed.; D
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  • Dwi Utami (7/16/2010 4:49:00 AM)

    wow virgin breast!
    Holy milk when I'know the taste this milk? I'never drink holy milk.just i'know a ''manna''bread from heaven, great poem of you: thumb: : thumb:
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/29/2010 5:47:00 AM)

    oh goodie... yup... it is a thoughtful and thought-provoking piece... written by a true poet (Report) Reply

  • Siddartha Montik (6/7/2010 11:44:00 AM)

    nice one Nivedita! ! Liked it much! ! give a 10 + (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2010 11:08:00 AM)

    Glorious expression of Motherhood....Cyclic weeping//Love flowering//Fracturing trust...still //forgiveness...Your style and use of words is unparalleled, no wonder you get so many poets to eager to savor its fragrance and comment. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2010 2:17:00 PM)

    Thoughtful, and thought-provoking piece.Thank you for sharing...Mari (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2010 3:09:00 PM)

    Breast is the symbol of womanhood and most importantly, motherhood. This particular poem goes beyond the profanity of lust and despite prolific usage of symbolism, remains exquisite in taste and expression...alabaster! (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2010 2:39:00 AM)

    Hon’ble Poet Dr. tony Brahmin

    Sir I thank you very much for the comment….

    Reading your comment I feel to address your question…what I’ve guessed from your quoted lines…‘Love flowething /Thro’ virgin breast’

    How milk can flow from ‘virgin’ breast …yeah textually it is impossible…

    Well the part where I’m reared ….where connotation of ‘virgin’ depicts unless one is married one must not get conceived or have sexual relation in vogue… [but now scenario is changing by the storm of globalization &c]

    Here symbolically Virgin has been used in stanza one ‘Fracturing fragrance of trust? ’…and to get back the trust …hoist the glory of Motherhoodness… found as the poetry rolls over…

    Its mother’s symbolic protest and appeal to, Who made it happen’…though she knows

    And she wants, ‘Unborn to honor /As riches from love/Not lurid lust.’ …here blooming and floridness of Motherhoodness emerges…she wants union and no separation for the honor of unborn...

    I’d be happy to address any query from all reader on my poem [within radius of my capability] …and with humility welcome it …

    Thanks Sir
    Copy to Hon’ble Poet Poet Dr. tony Brahmin
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  • (5/20/2010 6:45:00 AM)

    Quite mysterious I would say. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/20/2010 3:47:00 AM)

    Love flowething
    Thro’ virgin breast

    sometimes it is diffcult to understand yourpoems. but i love ur expressions.
    some times i feel a lot of contadictions too. would u please explain yur poem in a message. i would be grateful.
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  • Raju Baruah (5/8/2010 10:26:00 AM)

    O’ breast feel jamboree
    Nip inertia embarrassment...
    prolific writing..really an impressive feelings with profound expression
    Thanks for sharing
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  • (4/27/2010 6:22:00 PM)

    Niv: You have expressed, in a most impressive poem, the love of motherhood. We can only echo your voice in sounding like a glorious bugle as we express the importance of motherhood. Thanks for a good write. Lynn (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2010 2:02:00 PM)

    Beguiling poem…first 7 lines extremely lithe and fluffy…
    In this poem poet expressed her deep love for baby and wants union of her spouse…

    ‘…Unborn to honor /As riches from love/Not lurid lust.

    Here florid Motherhood is expressed…I thank poet for such a moving poetry 10
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  • (4/23/2010 12:05:00 PM)

    Redefined Motherhood!

    ‘…O’ breast feel jamboree/Nip inertia embarrassment. ‘

    Again glorification of Motherhoodness!

    I thank you Ma’am for such a beautiful poem…
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  • (4/17/2010 12:12:00 PM)

    Beguiling beaut enchanting

    Mother Son relations defined and as additive Father came into purview and preview…
    Dr. V
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  • (4/16/2010 3:36:00 AM)

    Your write contains power of rhythm and idea, a beautiful poem indeed, thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010

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