Home Alone, Prose Not A Poem Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Home Alone, Prose Not A Poem

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Carbon Monoxide a colorless odorless gas,
A compound of carbon due to inadequate supply of Oxygen,
It is highly combustible and one of the two of the water gas,
The other is Hydrogen also combustible.

It's homes are water underground tanks,
Wells and man holes,
And even our bed room with closed windows and doors,
The Split Air conditioner cools and circulates imprisoned air of the room,
Gradually Oxygen is decreased and Carbon Dioxide is increased,
But distributors say, not a luxury at all.

And in such an environment if anything is continuously heated,
Due to scarcity of Oxygen, Carbon Monoxide is produced,
Being colorless and odorless, not felt at all,
It destroys hemoglobin.

Hemoglobin a gauge of your health,
That absorbs Oxygen and carries it to heart,
A survey shows it is low in middle class,
Middle class that makes the trends and brings revolutions!

Tuesday, November 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: irony
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A couple lost their 25 year old son in a fire at home on June 4th, instant. The son who had graduated with MBA, two weeks earlier had come home for a while. He had lunch with his dad at home and decided to go back to bed. His father told him to wait, to meet his mother, before he went back for a few days. He decided to take a nap while waiting for his mom to come back home from work. Sometime later their neighbors called 911 when they saw black smoke coming out of the house.
Unfortunately, the 25 years old died in the three year old house. It took several days of investigation to find out the cause of the fire.
It was determined that the fire was caused by the laptop resting on the bed. When the laptop was on the bed cooling fan did not get the air to cool the computer and that is what caused the fire. He did not even wake up to get out of the bed because he died of breathing in carbon monoxide emitted out of burnt laptop.
The reason I am writing this to all of you is that I have seen many of us and also our brothers& sisters sons, daughters, friends, and family using the laptop while in bed. Let us all decide and make it a practice not to do that. The risk is real. Let us make it a rule not to use the laptop on bed with blankets and pillows around. Please educate as many people as you can.
(With thanks to Face Book)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saheb Mohapatra 04 November 2014

very pathetic one.........greatly enjoyed it........thanks

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Salini Nair 05 November 2014

Middle class that makes the trends and brings revolutions! ............thanks for this informative write.................

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Valsa George 10 November 2014

I have seen so many times, my son sleeping on bed with the lap top on! Oh, I never knew this could be so dangerous! Thank you for passing this information! Definitely you deserve to be congratulated Akhtarji for this life saving warning!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 November 2014

Carbon monoxide is very dangerous when there is fire in a house and we try to break the door then CO is reacting with outside Oxygen and it acts as putting oil or inflammable .and part when kerosene is burnt in a room then when stove is off, it releases CO..n a closed room it act like poison and many died nice text of course thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Walterrean Salley 05 November 2014

Thank you very much for this informative piece - raising an important awareness. I will share this sad information as much as I can. It could very well save someone's life.

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 November 2014

A nice write that increased my knowledge.

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