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Home, Quite Alone...

Rating: 5.0

My family drove off mere hours ago
to visit Grandma on her birthday,
thus I am home and quite all alone.

First thing I undertook post-farewell
was doff my duds down to the undies,
hotter, t'was, than Homer Simpson's hell.

Ne'er may I dance to song as I please - -
tho' the spirit may often move me,

for my kin fling up arms, shriek and tease.
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Moya Levy 13 August 2006

lol! ! ! ! love that moment of release followed by sudden realisation that perhaps it wasn't the time or place after all lol! Moyax

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R H 10 August 2006

Hysterical tale Esther! - a moment of footloose freedom expertly told! Love the way you made the words dance too. Justine

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Will Barber 06 August 2006

Well, Esther, this made me laugh aloud. I refuse to believe the 'Elaine' bit - you're obviously a ballerina. The rest - eh, I'm sure every word is true. So, were the police involved? - Will

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Dee Daffodil 05 August 2006

LOL....You wild girl! ! ! What a wicked imagination you have! You inspire me! ! Hugs, Dee

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Anna Russell 31 July 2006

Hee hee hee! You funny, funny woman. Hugs Anna xxx

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Scarlett Treat 31 July 2006

Oh, Darling Essemee! ! Only you would dance in your underwear and lock yourself out! ! Or even the thought of it to come to you! ! How funny, to think of you cowering under the deck! And how tasty those bugs started to look - - too funny! !

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Alison Cassidy 30 July 2006

Esther, You have told your sorrowful-humorous tale very well. I can imagine the abandoned joy of your dancing as you slowly disrobe only to finD? Horrow of horrows! The awful realisation? Clever the change of line length. It worked very well. You have captured the episode brilliantly. love, Allie xxxxxxxx

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Esther Leclerc 30 July 2006

Oh, no no no no! Undies firmly in place, both sets, top n' bottom! Of course, it all happened inside; so very hot out there, saying bye, it took some time to cool down, so...

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Brian Dorn 30 July 2006

Esther, this sounds like one of those 'Home Alone' movies... but the X-rated version. Funny stuff... keep dancin' Brian

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