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House Of War

Rating: 5.0

My dream was to live in a house
I did work hard day in and day out
To make my beautiful house
Brick by brick my dream came true
Aesthetical it came out awesome
Who ever saw it either,
they bit their finger or
their Hat fell down but alas!
the people I thought would
make the house of brick

the home to live
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Saturday, December 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: house,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is conceptualized by my son Mohammed Omair Hussain, he is 9 years old.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 12 December 2015

A dream that turns into a nightmare, love is a free emotion to allow the person to live his life not to be tortured as this is the death of love! Beautiful write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2015

Dream remains alive to make house beautiful. Having torture and selfish motives inside causes war. This is sad to see war in house and having love in house in nice for peaceful living. A very nice poem shared definitely.10

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Indira Renganathan 14 December 2015

Very much close and true to present day's real life-10 Also thank you for your comment on my limerick Asim

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T Rajan Evol 13 December 2015

Amusing poem............................great thinking by younger one, Junior poet.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 December 2015

Wonderful concept of a 9 years old child, nicely changed in a beautiful poem by a great poet.

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 December 2015

Very true we do our best and they do their best it is a struggle of power, nice one man.

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 December 2015

Wonderful poem man..............10

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