How He Dealt With His Ego.. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

How He Dealt With His Ego..

Rating: 4.6

There, the mighty ego, once stood tall
thought HE was the centre of it all
but little did HE know, a fate so grim
was waiting for HIM, oh how slim

HIS world revolved around his own pride
never did HE let anyone else abide
but one day, fate played its cruel game
and HIS ego was put to shame

It all started with a simple mistake
a slip of tongue, oh what a fake
but HIS ego, it could not handle
and thus began its ultimate dismantle

First, it started with a little bruise
but soon it turned into a huge abuse
HIS pride, it took a serious blow
and HIS ego, it started to slow

HE tried to hold on, to keep it alive
but HIS ego, it could not survive
It slowly withered, faded away
leaving HIM vulnerable, in disarray

No longer was HE the Center of attention
no longer did HE demand perfection
HIS ego, once so mighty and strong
was now gone, forever gone

And as HE look back, with a sigh
HE realize, it was all a lie
HIS ego, it was just a facade
a mask HE wore to hide HIS flaws

So here HE stand now without a trace
of HIS ego, once upon a face
and I must say HE did a fantastic thing
to finally let go of HIS false EGO....

Wednesday, January 17, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: pride
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2024

A great lesson in life in this amazing poem! Brilliant presentation and beautiful poetic expressions! Top Marks and to my favorites!

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Nabakishore Dash 17 January 2024

His ego---------his flaws' really ineffable philosophy

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Nabakishore Dash 17 January 2024

Excellent work, thought and write.May be pod one fine morning.

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Dennis Ryan 17 January 2024

It sounds like you have a very big ego yourself to write a poem like this. It takes one ego to recognize another, doesn't it, my friend …

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Narcissism does not help..

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2024

I believe that my INFERIOR wife is meaning 'ego' with THIS meaning: 'An exaggerated sense of self-importance; conceit.' Well I'm ONLY acting sa any SUPERIOR person would around an INFERIOR ONE! ! ! You may now award me the FIVE stars I deserve for this, my comment. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2024

My wife seems to feel I have an ego [she may say a 'large ego' or 'too big of an ego'; it's been while since she told me.

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Bri Edwards 17 January 2024

Of the THREE definitions I quickly found by 'googling' 'define ego', I wonder which definition YOU AND YOUR READERS are thinking of; perhaps different ones are 'using' DIFFERENT DEFINITIONS? ? ! ! i THINK, Asim, you should state 'your' definition! : )

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Kim Barney 17 January 2024

Well done, Asim!

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