How Impatient I Am Poem by Rajan T Renganathan

How Impatient I Am

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I created an Artificial Intelligent machine and named it - SUPRA
It had all the commands,
I needed to get the work done and follow me
In all my excitement I tested it, wow came first.....
without knowing that one day it will realise all this
and will start doing things on its own
Will not follow my command
I got mad even when such thought appeared in my mind
and I destroyed it and killed,
But look at our Creator,
HE created and we are not following His teachings
and yet HE is merciful and compassionate towards us.

Tuesday, April 11, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: god,creation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zumas Millamo 11 April 2023

Yeah, Only one God and He is very kind and merciful.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 13 April 2023

HE always gives a life's time for you to correct your deeds... Good thinking good write

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M. Asim Nehal 12 April 2023

We are ungrateful to our Creator.

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Nabakishore Dash 12 April 2023

A very good message written in a praiseworthy style dear poet.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 April 2023

Bravo! ! ! ! Rajan excellent piece

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Wow! That is a great revelation. That, we, all humans tend to forget! A most pertinent reminder

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