Hugs Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
Hugs
He hugs everyone
His hold is so tight
He should use a deodorant.
Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Rose Marie, this poem is both warm and sweet...... if he will use deodorant... 10+++
A terse poem that won't ease its hold on you! Fowl air is overwhelming! I'm not sure a cover up is enough! !
This is definitely a senryu: it has that sharp, incisive line at the end! But I take it as a haiku: for I very much love hugs, more than kisses! Loved it!
Using deodorant is a fashion of modern civilization. This poem reflects clearly.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 9:00:01 PM # 1.0.0
Nothing wrong with his hugs but his body odor? Oh, No.
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