Humble Creatures We Are Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Humble Creatures We Are

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Humble creatures we are
mellow breeze and the running stream
green pasture and hills around
all are ours, no deal from thee
and we are the masters beyond...

Pristine white swan, colourful peacock
sweet nightingale and the delightful seagale
birds of many kind across the land migrate to live
no where they go in the Nature`s cage fly within!

Unlocked we are
in the dense forest, snow covered mountains
diving in deep sea, flying over the wide sky
in the nature`s cage we are
the free humble creatures........

Living in the Nature`s cage
strained we are...........
the terror striken face, pale and fainted
lifeless iron structures cemented within closed doors,
where dark inside with litted colourful lamps
naked lies in sweet tongues
and the foul smell, yet delicious dishes..

Living in the Nature`s cage
we are in our own cage
Locked inside Dark Hearted.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 27 October 2009

naked lies in sweet tongues and the foul smell, yet delicious dishes...superb expression....nice way of distinguishing man from other creatures...to end with truthful words of reality....wonderful poem

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Ian Bowen 27 October 2009

Excellent piece of poetry. Much to like in your well written piece.10/10 Regards, Ian

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