First Kiss Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

First Kiss

Rating: 5.0

Gifted are the eyes
to kiss the standing Lotus
in blush towards the radiant sun!

The first drops of rain
kissses the mother earth
and to dance in pouring kisses
the world of joy energise me!

when the morning cool breeze passing through
and the hisses in ear penetrates
shievring nerves went in thunder
kisses of first ray brings in
all the livings in delight!

And the first kiss
rosy cheeks in blush and cool
and the beautiful lips glitter
shining nose in radiance
emotions in me thundered!

posture and in breath sweling ups of bossom
hottest air swirls in me!

taking you in air in swift
the loveliest moments born in me
the first kiss on your cheek
is ever remain in me
and in the long walk of life
turning the pages the First Kiss
always ever live in me............

Rakesh Bedi 27 August 2009

Very soft emotions you have projected, lago lago, and that too Beautifully!

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Sweet and wonderful poem Lago..enjoyed the images of that kisses which filled the earth with radiant rays which light every heart....

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Ejaz Khan 27 August 2009

Very romantic poem, depicting the emotions related to magical first kiss, I enjoyed each and every line of this write! Thanks for sharing!

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Eyan Desir 27 August 2009

Very nice....well written I thought your first kiss passed a long time ago you should have written this poem 30 years ago haha good job..........

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 June 2010

Metaphorically you’ve expanded the horizon of ‘First Kiss’…by all and every limits…finally noetic kiss to beloved culminated in…and wonderful journey in the Kiss Bliss… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Noel Horlanda 20 September 2009

the first kiss in everything is there to remain forever whether it's the first kiss of love or deceitfulness I don't care. Yeah, first kiss never dies, it lives forever. Nice one, love it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2009

great feelings emitting this poem! I can say this poem has poemotharaputic content! excellent! 10+

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

A lovely and lively description of touch by nature and with lips and the expression is blissful to the individual, poet and the reader. Nice romanticism.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

is ever remain in me and in the long walk of life turning the pages the First Kiss always ever live in me............ romantic poem but what a way of putting it. i really liked it most....10 read mine watched helplessly...bright eyes..brown eyes

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