Hypocritical Oath Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Hypocritical Oath

Rating: 5.0


Will you cry for them
When they commit sin
The deadliest one
Taking their own life?

Will you think about
You so raping them
Of body and mind
For your damn pleasure?

Will you ask for forgiveness
And be absolved of your sins
By hypocritical oath
Of the damned lost and found church

Tuesday, August 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: child abuse,childhood ,forgiveness,god,pleasure,sin,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In memory of the innocent victims of child abuse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 25 August 2018

A poem of truths? surely there is no forgiving evil! ..........well written Richard

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Richard Wlodarski 29 August 2018

In this case, the truth really hurts! Tom, thank you for believing it to be well written.

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Susan Williams 23 August 2018

I am so hoping this Pope cleans house. I am not a Catholic but he has won my respect- -now let's see how he does when every cardinal in the place will probably he against drastic reform... Your poem has righteous fire in its eyes, my friend, it should be used to scorch a bunch of cardinal feathers. Great poem. 10++++++++++++++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 23 August 2018

Susan, I too have great respect for this pope! He is like no other. If anyone can clean house, it's him. Your scorch line is a classic. Love it! Thank you so much for believing that the poem is great.

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Rajnish Manga 23 August 2018

This is unforgivable, more so when the sinners belong to the revered Roman Catholic order. They have broken the trust of all followers of the faith. We can listen to the cries of those victimised. Thanks, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 August 2018

In total agreement, Rajnish! Thank you for your support.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 August 2018

A very powerful write for the innocent victims of child abuse. Each stanza in this poem stands out. Very touching and moving lines. Brilliantly penned.10+++

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Richard Wlodarski 22 August 2018

Rose Marie, I am overwhelmed with your very positive feedback. Humbled and greatly flattered. Thank you so very much!

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Carl Roussell 22 August 2018

How can they be absolved of these sins?

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Richard Wlodarski 22 August 2018

Precisely my point, Carl!

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