I Am In You ♥ ♥ ♥ Poem by Luwi Habte

I Am In You ♥ ♥ ♥

Rating: 5.0


I am in you
As you are inside me

I am second half of you
as you are in me

I am earnest
As you are my ideas

I am honest
As you are my faith

I am keen
As you are my queen

I am proud
As you are my guide

I am much better
As you are my sister

love poem for sis!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Mcmanus 05 October 2009

A touching poem Luwi that glides along smoothly through the emotions you express, very sweet.

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Obinna Eruchie 04 October 2009

She is in you, as you are in her, what lovely sisters you two make. Adorable.

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Emma Adamyan 03 October 2009

a great ode to ur sister. i wish u the only one thing, that through the years u r still that close to each other, so u could dedicate to her this poem again, although it will hold another feeling, as if its another poem

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Sanjib Das 02 October 2009

YOU LOVE YOUR SISTER, WE BECOME YOUR ADMIRER. YOUR POEMS SHOW QUALITY, I WRITE THE COMMENT FULL OF DIGNITY. I GIVE YOU 10/10

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~ Jon London ~ 29 September 2009

A beautiful and well written share of the special love, only sisters have....Natural.....well done, lovely piece to read and share 10

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Bert Bell 05 November 2010

A very nice pem. I agree with Niv. It's so nice to see an expression of sibling love.10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 November 2009

Instead of sibling jealousy [most common] you’ve shown the other side ‘sibling-love’ Excellent Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page and grace by your comment …please niv

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Prakash Mehra 09 October 2009

A good poet, a good person, what else shud i say!

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Anthony Ominiabohs 07 October 2009

Truly one of the best poems av read. u're really good.

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Josephine Dunn 05 October 2009

How beautiful to have family you can express such love for :)

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