I Am Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

I Am Love.

Rating: 5.0


I am the way you see the world.
I prompt the thoughts you have every day.
Find me in your gasp of delight
When viewing dawn's sunrise, then I will stay.

I will be fire, in your breast,
Setting ablaze all the dreams of your mind.
I am your scales, the weights you use
To judge motives fairly of humankind.

I am your bridge to measure truths.
I go beyond conditions, yearning
To teach you peace, I bring release
Into your soul freely, which you can't earn.

I am Love, - - please deal with me tenderly
Then your best interests I can defend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 06 May 2009

Love is the fire, Love inspires; Young and old, Nature's gold In love enfolds CP

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Catrina Heart 05 May 2009

I will be fire, in your breast, Setting ablaze all the dreams of your mind. I am your scales, the weights you use To judge motives fairly of humankind. --------- fabulous stanza written about love and friendship...divinity all over! 10+++

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Reshma Ramesh 05 May 2009

wow........beautiful.......

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i think i saw 'love' physically in her shinning radiance, reading this piece.. i guess that is what captivating means... beautiful

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

captivating verses...well expressed nicely...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 May 2009

yes a wonderful poem...sweeet poem..thanks

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Randy Hogan 15 May 2009

Mother Earth read this poem...... And she cries for the beauty and warmth for you abide to the words of love 10++++++++++ Sweet Flower soooooo many xoxo

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Michele Hegarty 14 May 2009

Dear Fay, I love this, staying open hearted and open minded, plus taking care of the precious feelings we can have (if we're lucky) is so important. We may get knocks and disappointments but if we keep the faith then love is there, family, friends, animals........Thank you for this one. Michele x

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

Lucid and lovely poem.10++

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Sid John Gardner. 11 May 2009

A beautiful inspirational poem Fay.Thanks for sharing. Sid xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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