It’s such a joyful day!
A rainbow glitters in the bright sky,
Majestic as it arches over Heaven.
Such an outstanding display of nature’s grace.
Amidst the visages painted with cheer,
Darkness encompasses my soul.
i like this one. sometimes no matter how wonderful everything around us is, we still remain sad because truly Happiness is within our hands.. cheer up..there's always a reason to smile..
I agree with the one below me. First, I read the title, preparing my mind for a depressing blow. Then you talk of positive things, and through the middle, I think ' Oh, he's being ironic, if not funny.' Then you just slap down that last line and all I'm left with is 'Whoa'. This was a great poem. I liked it. Elizabeth
WOW Alex I just found out that its acrostic as well as sophisticated. Very hard to do. BRAVO! (Thnx for pointing that out to me! Same for the Help Me Save Me =])
Whoa! I felt like you just slapped me in the face! You talk about a joyful day with rainbows and visages painted with cheer right to darkness encompassing your soul. Wham! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ow thatz so pretty. your very good.