I Am Sad Poem by Alex Gomez

I Am Sad

Rating: 5.0
 


It’s such a joyful day!

A rainbow glitters in the bright sky,
Majestic as it arches over Heaven.

Such an outstanding display of nature’s grace.
Amidst the visages painted with cheer,
Darkness encompasses my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Breeanna Mcelmurry 21 March 2009

ow thatz so pretty. your very good.

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Juneil Sechico 22 March 2009

very expressive! good!

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Seairra Kyger 24 June 2009

awwww i hate those days when everything seems so happy but you

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i like this one. sometimes no matter how wonderful everything around us is, we still remain sad because truly Happiness is within our hands.. cheer up..there's always a reason to smile..

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 30 March 2009

I agree with the one below me. First, I read the title, preparing my mind for a depressing blow. Then you talk of positive things, and through the middle, I think ' Oh, he's being ironic, if not funny.' Then you just slap down that last line and all I'm left with is 'Whoa'. This was a great poem. I liked it. Elizabeth

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Stephen Black 24 March 2009

WOW Alex I just found out that its acrostic as well as sophisticated. Very hard to do. BRAVO! (Thnx for pointing that out to me! Same for the Help Me Save Me =])

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Stephen Black 23 March 2009

Whoa! I felt like you just slapped me in the face! You talk about a joyful day with rainbows and visages painted with cheer right to darkness encompassing your soul. Wham! ! !

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