I Canot Stop Your Pain Poem by Luz Hanaii

I Canot Stop Your Pain

Rating: 3.8


It breaks my heart to know you hurt
I feel for you, for me, for those who ache
I can not stop your pain
Your pain is yours
Their pain is theirs
My pain is mine
We each have our hell to bare
Too many words could damage more
and not a word could slay you

Wednesday, March 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and friendship,suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2019

A highly imaginative poem is amazingly executed.it is so philosophical and social poem. I prefer the line....Your pain is yours /Their pain is theirs / My pain is mine. Well done

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Akhtar Jawad 13 April 2019

A realistic approach, we all feel pains of loneliness, but we cannot remove loneliness of all.

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Prabir Gayen 10 April 2019

We each have our to bare Too many words could damage more and not a word could slay you..... ...... beautiful

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Dipak Adhya 20 March 2019

It breaks my heart to know you hurt.....well penned..

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Luz Hanaii 24 March 2019

Dipak, Thank you for your support.

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