I Cant Stop Missing You Poem by Freespirit Juneja

I Cant Stop Missing You

Rating: 3.5


I can't stop missing you


Sitting in a gloomy place
Enjoying life's aloof phase
I Kindle my soul
With your love's environment
To breathe my only assignment
Every moment your presence renew
I seek far and wide for you
Because I can't stop missing you.

My life's getting dragged
Memories are getting stacked
Wish to listen your loving whispers
Fulfil your desires as your ambassador
Understand your heart's hunches
Despite, bearing life's punches
The cosmos paints a vanishing hue
But I can't stop missing you

Everyday is a haunting raid
Still early to go into Hades
Seems I've lost in the crowd
Light years from your beautiful sound
My heart wants to run and eschew
But nothing can part me from you
As I can't stop missing you

Seems I'm in an endless queue
Perspiring like morning dew
Everyday is a new Halloween
The Ghost is always following
But nothing can part me from you
As My heart just seeks for you
Because I can't stop missing you

Freespirit Juneja

Saturday, March 10, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When someone misses his / her love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rain ... 10 June 2012

Seems like I am lost in the crowd Light years away is your beautiful sound Everyday is a haunting raid Still early to go into Hades My heart wants to run and eschew But nothing can part me from you Because I can't stop missing you Great....I love this poem a lot..... -Rain..

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Diana Americano 02 April 2012

this poem is beautifully written very inspirational. it speaks to my heart. great job :)

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Ben Burger 08 April 2012

This poem is exceptional. The use of simile and metaphor is well used, But a little over used. I'm nit trying to demean the poem, not by a long shot. but the continuous use of metaphor causes long sentences and therefore slows down the flow and rhythm of the poem. I do not want to come of high and mighty here, I am simply giving feedback. You do not have to except it. But thank you for giving me this invitation to read such an lovely piece of literature

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Serena Taylor 23 April 2012

Wow, truelly wonderful

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Jasbir Chatterjee 19 May 2012

very poignant...very touching...but one has to grow out of obsessions sooner or later...

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Charity Nduhiu 18 August 2015

I can't stop missing you such a sweet dedication. I have loved it. Thanks

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Lyn Paul 19 May 2014

So beautifully written

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Leslie Philibert 19 May 2014

Like this too. Maybe some work on the rhyme scheme (my POV) might make it even better...

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Kirti Sharma 19 May 2014

Light years far from your beautiful sound My heart wants to run and eschew But nothing can part me from you...... beautiful lines.. nice poem

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Soumita Sarkar 20 May 2013

the pain of missing someone is so genuine..............keep writing! I invite you to go through my poems.Thank you.

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