I Cant Stop Missing You Poem by Freespirit Juneja
I Cant Stop Missing You
I can't stop missing you
Sitting in a gloomy place
Enjoying life's aloof phase
I Kindle my soul
With your love's environment
To breathe my only assignment
Every moment your presence renew
I seek far and wide for you
Because I can't stop missing you.
My life's getting dragged
Memories are getting stacked
Wish to listen your loving whispers
Fulfil your desires as your ambassador
Understand your heart's hunches
Despite, bearing life's punches
The cosmos paints a vanishing hue
But I can't stop missing you
Everyday is a haunting raid
Still early to go into Hades
Seems I've lost in the crowd
Light years from your beautiful sound
My heart wants to run and eschew
But nothing can part me from you
As I can't stop missing you
Seems I'm in an endless queue
Perspiring like morning dew
Everyday is a new Halloween
The Ghost is always following
But nothing can part me from you
As My heart just seeks for you
Because I can't stop missing you
Freespirit Juneja
This poem is exceptional. The use of simile and metaphor is well used, But a little over used. I'm nit trying to demean the poem, not by a long shot. but the continuous use of metaphor causes long sentences and therefore slows down the flow and rhythm of the poem. I do not want to come of high and mighty here, I am simply giving feedback. You do not have to except it. But thank you for giving me this invitation to read such an lovely piece of literature
this poem is beautifully written very inspirational. it speaks to my heart. great job :)
I can't stop missing you such a sweet dedication. I have loved it. Thanks
Like this too. Maybe some work on the rhyme scheme (my POV) might make it even better...
Light years far from your beautiful sound My heart wants to run and eschew But nothing can part me from you...... beautiful lines.. nice poem
the pain of missing someone is so genuine..............keep writing! I invite you to go through my poems.Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Seems like I am lost in the crowd Light years away is your beautiful sound Everyday is a haunting raid Still early to go into Hades My heart wants to run and eschew But nothing can part me from you Because I can't stop missing you Great....I love this poem a lot..... -Rain..