poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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I Could Explain

I wish I could better explain the term sorrow
Visualize and see the bright future for tomorrow
Why not be self independent rather than to borrow?
Walk with me for some distance with resolve to grow

I know love is heavenly sent gift
No scope for bitter feelings and rift
It can change foe to friends with complete shift
Life may boom with definite inspirational lift

One should have willingness to bow
I wonder and think but don’t ask how?
Things may develop and shape in its own way
Seek blessings and hope for shining ray

I never knew that I will be down with fever flu
Some magic thing like called ILU. (I love you)
To behave like cold person as simple dew
What a lovely feeling to be shared with only few?

God has created music with very good spell
Each may dance with joy and feel very well
Red cheeks may glow with bright sun shine
Feelings may run high without taking glass of wine

Little rise in palpitation but accept it with mild smile
As if you have some treasure in hand for while
Why does not it happen to walk for an extra mile?
Will this actually happen or remain in book or file?

I may have earnest desire to feel its pulse
What more I should have or feel for anything else?
It has great impact of attraction and magnetic pull
Heart is filled with love and life is not dull

I need not go on roof top and explain conduct
What is happening around may be universal fact?
Does this happen to all? I hide the face and feel very shy
I shouldn’t question how it happened and why?

Everybody does have simple way to feel
You may have great joy when you steal
Heart may have all the joy to fill
Does that happen at anybody’s will?


No one can put it improper way
No matter how do you feel or say
It is really matter of great pride
You should not conceal it or hide

It is happening at appropriate time and place
Once you are in then no one can replace
It is flowing in two ways direction
Beautiful feeling arise in every move or action

I must preserve it as holy feelings of its kind
Nothing should bother and no flaws to find
Why not express openly with happiness and joy
Must bear the happiness with smile and fully enjoy

Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, February 6, 2010

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  • Bharati Bhikhubhai (11/9/2009 8:05:00 AM)

    I wish I could explain sorrow.....lovley poem....10

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  • Pitilosi Mdala (11/9/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    you have explained and cleared everything in this poem, I could explain. Its worth to re-read

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  • Antonio Liao (11/8/2009 10:12:00 PM)

    truth that sublime the infinite harmony of reality.....your a genuine poet,
    telling what’s the extreme of life....the joy, the pain, the suspense, even
    the fear that makes man uneasy to live.....so beautiful that you can even,
    explain......thank you for sharing...i love it...a 10 +++

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  • Yacov Mitchenko (11/8/2009 4:24:00 AM)

    This is a poem about life and why many terrible things happen. You don't know why there is so much sorrow and lack of love. But the important thing is for the individual to remain reverent, to see the holy even amidst unfortunate events. I think that is the general theme here. Thank you. I appreciate the thoughtfulness.

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  • Rafique Farooqi (11/7/2009 9:05:00 PM)

    I may make earnest attempt to feel its pulse
    What more I should have or feel for anything else?
    It has impact of attraction and magnetic pull
    Heart is filled with ………………………

    I need not go on roof top and explain conduct
    What is happening around may be universal fact?
    Does this happen to all? I hide the face and feel very shy
    I shouldn’t question how it happened and w............................................................it is a beautiful message if we read again and again

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (11/4/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    the last stanza says it all. when you leave it to the almighty and accept what he sends.

    a ten

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  • Pami Panchal (11/1/2009 7:59:00 PM)

    I wish I could explain sorrow
    See the bright future for tomorrow

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  • Chetna Purohit (11/1/2009 1:02:00 AM)

    Why not be self independent rather than to borrow
    Walk with me some distance with resolve to grow

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  • Ashley Paul (10/31/2009 10:41:00 PM)

    One should have willingness to bow
    I wonder and think but don’t ask how?
    Things may develop and shape in its own way
    Seek blessings and hope for shining ray

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (10/31/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    Without love we are all not born and brought as of now sure! It's love making us what we are. Let us cherish love and live a better life as human beings! Nice message said in so many verses!

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  • Lady Grace (10/31/2009 3:04:00 AM)

    i wish you could explain sorrow
    as you see it in her eyes
    to stop you from loneliness
    keeping in your heart..

    i wish she could explain all the things
    that bothers inside you
    for it can comfort the surroundings
    and the environment within you...

    i wish i could see you in the best smile
    without jealousy and discomforts
    without hesitations and doubts
    wish a goodluck to BOTH....

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  • Catrina Heart (10/31/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Wish we could explain all things in just a simple way for everyone will be able to understand what's happening in our self, in our society, in our country and to the world............this is a great poem written and shared! ! ! 10++++++

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  • Radha Seth (10/30/2009 11:04:00 PM)

    I wish I could explain sorrow
    See the bright future for tomorrow
    Why not be self independent rather than to borrow
    Walk with me some distance with resolve to grow

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  • Saroj Davde (10/30/2009 10:47:00 PM)

    wish I could explain sorrow.............................


    See the bright future for tomorrow.wish i too could do it...lovely poem with purpose...10

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