I Don'T Know! Poem by I am not A POET

I Don'T Know!

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I don't know from where I came,
I don't know where I will go,
I only know that now I am here,
I will be here as long as I am here.

I will be here as long as I am here
leaving behind my body I will disappear
to the stars that shine above there
my grandparents told me where,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 23 June 2012

Really, it seems that a child is telling a tale as he/she heard it.So, simple but nice.

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Soulful Heart 04 January 2012

so beautifully said as if the child in u wanted to scream out................life is so simple yet we make it so complicated..........simple words simple life.......great write.

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Shadow Girl 25 November 2011

I love this....so much emotion and meaning in a nice compact rounded poem....great read....great thought provoking piece. -SG

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

I know...smiles....it is written in your soul before you are born, you simply must search your soul and truth will arise...blessings

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Marcus Mckinley 25 October 2011

like the saying goes the more you learn the more you realize you really don't know anything. that is the mystery of life. life would be boring if we knew all the answers anyway.

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Arfa Iris 17 May 2014

Really good! ! We all disappear one day.. But its worst wen we know that we miss someone n wen he knows it..

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Urshula Davis 26 June 2012

This is beyond nice! Awesome! !

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Kaila George 26 June 2012

Can I not tempt you to write more poems, you write so naturally, yet you say your not poet, I beg to differ on that statment alone.

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Meena Mustafa 26 June 2012

Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.

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Meena Mustafa 26 June 2012

Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.

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