She Never Gives Any................ Poem by I am not A POET

She Never Gives Any................

Rating: 4.4

She takes all the pain,
she never gives any,

She takes all the strain,
she never gives any,

She takes all the stress,
But she never gives any

She takes all the blame,
But she never gives any,

But what she gives is
Care and love with a sweet smile.

Neela Nath Das 21 June 2012

Simple but respect for her showered thru words.Wonderful.

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Soulful Heart 05 March 2012

is that ur mother? ...........................nicely put

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Ranis Thomas iii 02 February 2012

Very nice! Simple and straight to the point!

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Arathy Sj 10 November 2011

nice says a lot with a few words...lovely.. :)

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

nice write...I can feel your adoration in this work...thx for sharing...blessings....and keep up the good writing of your soul....

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Meena Mustafa 29 July 2012

Lovely :) such a sweet poem.

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 07 July 2012

beautiful is delicate to appreciate what she takes and what she gives

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 July 2012

it's a good poem and you are a good poet...You leave behind statements and questions that just dangle...

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Valerie Dohren 30 June 2012

Short and simple, but with a great message - good one, and I think you are a poet! !

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Kaila George 26 June 2012

Your write like a true poet, I dare you to write more, please I would like to see more of your work, throws the gaunlet down, are you ready for the challange my friend.

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