She takes all the pain,
she never gives any,
She takes all the strain,
she never gives any,
She takes all the stress,
But she never gives any
She takes all the blame,
But she never gives any,
But what she gives is
Care and love with a sweet smile.
nice write...I can feel your adoration in this work...thx for sharing...blessings....and keep up the good writing of your soul....
beautiful poem..it is delicate to appreciate what she takes and what she gives
it's a good poem and you are a good poet...You leave behind statements and questions that just dangle...
Short and simple, but with a great message - good one, and I think you are a poet! !
Your write like a true poet, I dare you to write more, please I would like to see more of your work, throws the gaunlet down, are you ready for the challange my friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simple but respect for her showered thru words.Wonderful.