When I Think I Am...

Rating: 4.8
When I think I am happy,
I know that I am not happy.

When I think I am sad,
I know that I am not sad,

When I think I am strong,
I know that I am not strong,

When I think I am weak,
I know that I am not weak,

When I think I am good,
I know I am not good,

When I think I am bad,
I know that I am not bad,

When I think I am rich,
I know that I am not rich,

When I think I am poor,
I know that I am poor,

When I think I am a human,
I know that I am a human,

Of course with blood & flesh.
Saturday, August 20, 2011
Valerie Dohren 30 June 2012
Another great write - well done you.
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Valsa George 27 June 2012
When you think you are not a poet Others think you're a poet....! Keep writing!
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Kaila George 26 June 2012
We all think to much...smiles be intresting to see more poems from you = }
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Kyra Schaneel 26 June 2012
one quesiton? why is your name thing I am not a POET?
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Meena Mustafa 25 June 2012
very simple and yet sweet :)
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(De Va) 05 November 2011
I really enjoyed this...nice style you have....but...you are not human, you only think you are...blessings
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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 October 2011
You've spent a lot of time thinking... it's a good pastime.
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Marcus Mckinley 25 October 2011
if you have to think about it then you are trying to hard to get it. all these things should flow naturally to you and through you like poetry.
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Jim Troy 18 September 2011
As a part of our station in life we are blessed with a certainty above all else. That certainty is that each and every one of us is a valid point of view. No point of view is more valid than another. There are only different angles or fields of perceptics perhaps.... But each is valid. With that in mind, my point of view says you have written a very fine poem that can stir some conversation. I happen to like that. Thanks for the invite......Jim Troy
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Renu Kakkar 17 September 2011
you wrote the truth.. life is made up of all ups and downs of live...we we are neither happy nor sad etc....poor does not mean money only..we are poor in some way or another
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