I Just Want To Say... Poem by I Am Charlie
I Just Want To Say...
because when you stormed out
with murder in your eyes,
stopped listening half way
to my list of
'reasons-i-should-hate-you' rant,
told me,
'I canna take this, lass, i'm out.'
Because when I chased you down the stairs,
you ran all the harder,
didn't look back, once, you pig,
and slammed the door
right onto my unsuspecting thumb.
Because when I peeked outside the window,
you were leaning against said door,
closed eyes, and all sagging shoulders,
I just wanted to say...
Listen, fool. I love you.
and, my thumb goddamn hurts.
'because when you stormed out with murder in your eyes' my favorite bit. really like this poem and your others <3 10
This is cute, warm, and humorous but sweet in one small but powerfull package penned with many different emotions that are triggered with anger/ love........ Very nicely composed..... Bonnie
ouch..lolz..does your thumb hurts? ...again again again, , , , i lav this piece grace
well balanced.....sad with a hint of laughter: D well done love and life hurt: P 10++
I concur with Karin, its Brilliant! ! ! and its life. Thank you for sharing of your talent, will be back :)
You say a lot with a few words. How much is lost in times of anger, but making up can be very satisfying. Hope you get your chance. Well done.
It is outstanding I love it. Lol it has very good humor and a lot of truths. I love the vivid arguement great discriptions!
Oh! God Charlie this is brilliant. It gave me a great chuckle and you explained the argument vividly admitting your love even so. Loved the ending too! 10 Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 9:38:59 AM # 1.0.0
What a great poem - tells a good story, and balances high emotion with humour. I'm giving this a 10 and adding it to my favourites.