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I'M The Ocean, You'Re The Sky - Poem by .Pd. is here

Inky gear with million accessories
The - Wisps of clouds
Charismatic Moon
And Celestial bodies.
You dazzle like a jewel
In the shinning carroty sun,
You’re calm and poised
When ornamented by the twinkling stars.
‘You’re the Sky’.

Crystalline drops wetted with effervescence
The - Ebbing and soaring waves
Turbulence and tranquility
Azure brilliance.
I catch the morning light
And sketch the rising sun on me.
I shine, I glow and I feel beautiful
When complimented by the sky.
‘I’m The Ocean’.

I love it when you are in a mischievous mood
It’s when you stir up a breeze - And play with me.
I treasure and hold every pearly tear that you shed
Happy or otherwise - And I consume it.
I love it when you elevate the temperature
It’s then that you evaporate me - And fly me to your abode.

We’re so much like the ‘Ocean and the Sky’ -
Eager to meet,
Complimenting each other,
Sharing Secrets,
Seeming to kiss and embrace.

We’re so much like the ‘Ocean and the Sky’ -
Summiting at the horizon -
Which is a mere apparition.

We touch,
But the touch dosen't reach
Beyond our borders.

(16 September 2006)


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  • (5/22/2007 4:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful Preets, beautiful, enjoyed reading it. Chhavi Anupam (Report)Reply

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  • (11/27/2006 4:44:00 AM)

    Well i must tell you that your poem has really got me thinking. I think you're an awesome poetess.What really strikes me about your poetry is your play with words which results in beautiful and very vivid images. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/26/2006 6:49:00 PM)

    By no means am I eloquent, I've no clever words to describe your poem. But it is beautiful. It is candid. And I thank you for sharing it

    Michael
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  • Arti Chopra (9/19/2006 4:36:00 AM)

    profound and vivid imagery....great poem Preeti (Report)Reply

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  • (9/16/2006 4:03:00 AM)

    Preeti - You did excel in the use of imagery here. You sometimes beat us on maturity in comparison to your age. Those comparisons and the realtion between the ocean and sky in the poem is well thought of - impeccable! The spirituality trickles down the readers minds with each of your words. Simply speaking - this is a remarkable love poem - you did beat many other poets here. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/16/2006 1:36:00 AM)

    preets...the ocean and the sea...they compliment each other so totally...well written piece...i think the end should have been more punchy...love...nalini (Report)Reply

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  • (9/16/2006 1:35:00 AM)

    Hi

    They appear to meet.

    This got to be your master piece from this matured pen.


    I love the poem of this kind.

    They meet when she sweats and while he rains :)

    They meet, they are not far off I Hope.

    Hope
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  • (9/16/2006 1:08:00 AM)

    Excellent! I see the two valuable souls divided by the illusionary horizon!
    Something like a spiritual love........the poor ocean evaporates gradually and makes passing clouds in the sky?
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 15, 2010


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