I can no longer hear my melody,
I can only feel such agony,
As I suffer in discontment,
And I see no hope lambent.
I runaway from feeling,
Cause I see no reason beaming,
Would I, could I, should I,
ever let you go?
Distorted, I'm left hanging,
Into simple misunderstandings,
As I quaver when I talk to you,
But it won't matter what I do.
You'd still look at her,
Then I'm stuck as I chatter,
Would I, Could I, Should I,
just let you go?
This stupid infatuation,
or this so called adoration,
Helped me recover from much pain,
But there's nothing left to obtain.
It's just that you feel nothing,
No likeness nor meaning
Would I, Could I, Should I,
just let you be?
It's not easy letting go,
And what I'll do, I just don't know,
Would I, Could I, Should I? ?
I must let you go!
Wow... I think you are so far beyond this person... hard to believe he was lucky enough to ever had been 'picked up' by you. Great reflective/explorative poem.
that would be the hardest thing to do... to let go of the person you like with no reason at all.. it's already hard letting go when you know the reason but letting go w/o knowing the reason would just be the worst thing...
a very sad composition.. but maybe its for the best.. and maybe its not.. just make sure u'll have no regrets in the end...
No one's forcing you to...and there's nothing great achieved without risks..hehe, keep writing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hey..I'm a new member and this is the first poem i read.Uhm.It's really whoah.Like off the top.But i'm really wondering why you you have to let go for no reason? ? ? ..You're a really great poet..Keep it up..