A Perfect Story Poem by Nashy Lamen

A Perfect Story

Rating: 5.0


Her eyes flicker once,

No perfect structure,

flickers twice,

vision blurry and obscure,

Her eyes keep searching,

tiresome, red, closing...............slowly,

Forced open, venturing

from pair to pair,

dizzy, crossed, seperated........abruptly,

No sense found,

stuck, glued on to oblivion,

No clear foresight,

hasty to find out the exact reason,

fragmented purposes,

No Vacancy!

unfasten shields,

gradually breaking free...

Clasped once again into horrid nuisance,
Quickly absconding from sweet acceptance,
Left alone to feel lonely,
Slowly breaking into insanity,

Slowly..............Surely...............Exactly...............

Lost.......................... Failed to prevail................

Tainted heart, drowned in lies...........................

Slowly....... Dying........ Slowly..... UNVEILED.....

Next day,


Found dead,

No true reason,

For suicidal nonsense,

Sweet Intoxication,

No pulse rate,

No Beat,

And no one.....

I MEAN NO ONE...

Came to the day when:

Body was poured with soil,
Soul was set free to the heavens,
Body underneath grassy fields....
Atop the lifeless body a gravestone...

R usted
I nsoluble
P urpose

of the lifeless soul,

Died for no reason....
For she thought she had no reason....

to live....

:)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabrina Jubahar 29 August 2009

so beautiful. this piece has its own mind spoken. this is so nice! ! !

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Logan Pope 29 August 2009

Hey..Why did the themes of your poems suddenly change? Either way they're still good.But why change it? ..You're good..Really good..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

Died for no reason.... For she thought she had no reason....not good step at all she should have faced the consequaences... very good write....10 read mone... never say die////when feet start crumbling.....innocence regained

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Obinna Eruchie 29 August 2009

How she failed to face her problem squarely, and took the wrong way out, suicide. Emotional to read.

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Nikunj Sharma 29 August 2009

Good touching, poignant story.you are a master story teller...god bless

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

Wow quite a perfect poem too Natasha.I'm very impressed.Keep up the good work!

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Julia Pascual 30 August 2009

ok, nash.. don't attemp suicide... haha... joke... a very very well made poem... different... keep it up...

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Lorena Cruz 29 August 2009

A person ending her life for she thought she has no reason... If ever you feel you don't see your reason don't kill your self ok... joke.. hahaha.. well done... keep on rocking..

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Marieta Maglas 29 August 2009

Excellent poem, Natasha..thank you for sharing....be blessed................10+++++

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Nikunj Sharma 29 August 2009

Good touching, poignant story.you are a master story teller...god bless

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