****i Need You**** Poem by lil island Gal
****i Need You****
if one day you feel like crying...
call me
i dont promise that
i will make you laugh,
but i can cry with you.
if one day you want to run away...
dont be afraid
to call me
i dont promise to
ask you to stop
but i can run with you.
if one day you
dont want to listen...
to anyone..
call me
i promise to be there
for you
and i promise
to be very quiet,
But if one day
you call
and there is
no answer
come fast to see me...! ! ! !
perhaps i need u
This is a charming poem, lil Gal, and it was a pleasure to read. It was nicely phrased and made good sense. Your use of the English language was very good except for the word 'quiet' which you spelled incorrectly as 'quite, ' another word with a different meaning entirely. It did not, however, affect the flow of your interesting poem. Carl.
if one day you dont want to listen... to anyone.. call me i promise to be there for you and i promise to be very quite .........................I doubt this part of your promise :))) 10
everyone can count on you marry....especially to write a great poem like this! ! :) you're just awesome that way... thanks, i love this poem +10
The passion of being compassionate and empathy jumps from the pages of this wonderful penning...reminding me of what agappe love is really all about...the poetess pen exposing her character.....Bravo
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 7:08:15 AM # 1.0.0
very nice, my dear...we could all use a friend like you...