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I Remember You - Tanka

Rating: 5.0

Everytime I see
The rays of the morning sun
I remember you
Your warmth diffuses freely
You share your light evenly.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 14 July 2021

They all are signs of HIS presence. This poem can be used for Creator and beloved both. Awesome poem..10**

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Varsha M 14 July 2021

Oh wow. What a compliment? I too keep it for myself.

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Thank you dear Rose for these precious pearl like poems....top stars

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Every day i shall remember you......touching and soulful

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Lee Su 13 July 2021

Thank you I will take it to my heart!

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

This has a beautiful spiritual feeling as well! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

I'm sure all who read this, recall someone very dear and special in their life that brings joy and warmth to their hearts! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

Oh, What a heart warming poem with such beautiful sentiments! ..

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Indira Renganathan 20 July 2021

Short and cute with deep meaning....great work in few lines....5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 July 2021

This amazing Tanka deservesr 5 Stars Fullest on Top! So crystal clearly put, and heartwarnming! I have enjoyed very much this Tanka full of brilliance

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