i see your face
in every place
while smiling
and when i cry
nothing but your face
i see in the sky
i watch a star
in outer space
it also turns out
to be your face
my life is hell
i live it with disgrace
dying all night
fighting for the light
for the only hope
i can see in sight
which is meeting u
that seems so bright
stupidly for u
i still fight
giving up on u
is what`s right
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me i blame
for knowing your name
i feel ashame
for enduring the pain
for living the dream
of seeing u again
Bravo! ! ! I love this poem. It really underlines the feeling you get when you miss someone. Excellent work,10/10 definatly. Xx Amie-Lee Xx
Usually, I'm not a fan of love poems, but that was amazingly written, well expressed and beautifully ended. Well done
You have written this with sensitivity and straight from your heart. As the title suggests we do see everywhere what we crave and I commend for your honesty. 10 Karin Anderson
This one made me smile for some reason. I can so easily relate to this one. It's very scary for me this one but I do love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sensible and touching.....10++ sathya narayana