Left Alone Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Left Alone

Rating: 4.6

without me you will have nothing but torment and mischief
go on and leave me renounce your belief
anyway our tree has only one leaf
it is one of sadness one of grief
stolen from heaven by an honest thief

but god sent an angel to my way
to punish me and take it away
i fought him so he made it decay
you hadn`t stood by me so together we couldn`t stay

As much as I loved you No one would do
anything could be false but my love is true

Stefanie Birmingham 04 September 2010

very nice! ! flows very well. bravo Tareq

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Eman Obied 04 September 2010

that's one beautiful poem! I like the first lines the most, they relate to alot of people out there :)

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Apathetic Genius 05 September 2010

Very deep, I can relate!

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Naz Nen 06 September 2010

i luvd it, its realy a well written poem, i enjoyed readin it keep it up

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 September 2010

In so many simple words you have proved at the end that your love is true and not false. A fine composition.

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Kat Kaufman 01 February 2012

awww... i can relate. this is a beautiful, lovely poem and so very true. thanks for sharing it [3

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Ncamie Pretty Khanyile 12 December 2010

My heart beat fast towards my breast for your emotions flow with every system in your body and sorely everything can be false but love never compensate a lie

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Margo Dove 01 December 2010

Very nice way to speak of God and living without Him.

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Taylor Dubay 29 November 2010

this is a deep poem. I could read it over and over and find new ways to percieve it. :) I like poems that get me thinking

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Ronell Warren Alman 02 November 2010

it is amazing how much sorrow one feels when he or she is left alone! Nicely penned here!

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Tareq Jalabi

Tareq Jalabi

Russian Federation
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