Ashes Of Love Poem by Tareq Jalabi
Ashes Of Love
Burn me to ashes
and throw them in the air
when you see flashes
to that area please stare
keep opening your eye-lashes
you may find me there
a piece of me might fly
and settle on your hair
but will you know me
will you be aware
or will you mix me
with the dirt of the air
***
say the naked truth
please do swear
to come to my grave
only if you care
then feel your own soul
and you will find mine there
tell me your feelings
your pain with me share
and then mixing souls
will be no longer rare
I am one of those who has taken many lives to learn that the omnipresent God is inside each of us.. providing all we need. I no longer need be under the illusion that one needs completion from another. It has been a very bitter school.
A unique poem in description and style. Last two lines are wonderful.
your ending is amazing! ! ! I love it! such strong work and really cool message. great job. Becca
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Wow, I’m touched, impressed and speechless. It’s very deep, strong and gloomy. Your words are golden and your idea is unique; it’ll stick in the mind of your reader for ages. I’m NOT exaggerating but seriously this is beyond amazing and I think you are a great poet with a great natural talent. Keep up the good work I wouldn't change anything
Hi Blue eyes, your poems are very much real and experiences that i relate to through thought or real life. I like this poem, your a great poet
Startling originality. Written with music and passion. 10, from me. Kind regards, Sandra
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I would like to translate this poem
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Wow Im serious you are amazingly good I love it!