Tareq Jalabi

Rookie (20\11\1988 / Russian Federation)

Ashes Of Love - Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Burn me to ashes
and throw them in the air
when you see flashes
to that area please stare
keep opening your eye-lashes
you may find me there
a piece of me might fly
and settle on your hair
but will you know me
will you be aware
or will you mix me
with the dirt of the air
say the naked truth
please do swear
to come to my grave
only if you care
then feel your own soul
and you will find mine there
tell me your feelings
your pain with me share
and then mixing souls
will be no longer rare

Comments about Ashes Of Love by Tareq Jalabi

  • (11/22/2009 3:25:00 PM)

    Awesome! You express yourself very well, a descriptive poet! I know, cause we have many things in common to our poems.. I'm inviting you to visit my poetry! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/17/2009 4:35:00 PM)

    Wow, I’m touched, impressed and speechless. It’s very deep, strong and gloomy. Your words are golden and your idea is unique; it’ll stick in the mind of your reader for ages. I’m NOT exaggerating but seriously this is beyond amazing and I think you are a great poet with a great natural talent. Keep up the good work

    I wouldn't change anything
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  • (6/1/2009 7:30:00 PM)

    Hi Blue eyes, your poems are very much real and experiences that i relate to through thought or real life. I like this poem, your a great poet (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2009 4:23:00 PM)

    Startling originality. Written with music and passion.
    10, from me.

    Kind regards,

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  • (4/12/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    excellent. really enjoyed reading this (Report) Reply

  • (3/13/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    Wow Im serious you are amazingly good I love it! (Report) Reply

  • (1/12/2009 6:51:00 PM)

    I am one of those who has taken many lives to learn that
    the omnipresent God is inside each of us..
    providing all we need. I no longer need be under the illusion
    that one needs completion from another.

    It has been a very bitter school.
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2008 9:01:00 PM)

    Good job keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/30/2008 8:33:00 PM)

    A unique poem in description and style. Last two lines are wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    your ending is amazing! ! ! I love it! such strong work and really cool message. great job.
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  • Miriam Maia Padua (12/23/2008 8:42:00 PM)

    i love your style....
    your works are great...feelings are express really from heart
    very convincing enough for every reader to feel the pain...very touching and soulfull.....more power...more splendid write to share with us...
    Merry Christmas.....
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2008 8:05:00 AM)

    Wow! IT's a really great poem! (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2008 7:54:00 AM)

    Your poems are fantastic! Keep going on, you're fabulous. Please could you comment some of my poems. That's will be a honor for me. (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    damn, i sallute for this.. haha! !

    keep it up! !
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  • (11/20/2008 4:24:00 PM)

    I really love the rhyme scheme in this. I find it hard to rhyme without sounding light and somewhat childish, but you manage it beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2008 5:05:00 AM)

    Wow! Impressive! The rhymes..the words..the emotions! It's really great! ..are you really 20? ... (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2008 8:06:00 PM)

    This is a really refreshing poem to read. I enjoyed and appreciated it so much, and I was particularly impressed with your rhyming scheme. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Ershad Mazumder (10/11/2008 10:08:00 PM)

    If you really love me
    Gaze on the sky
    When it is midnight
    You will see me
    Among the twinkling stars

    If you really love me
    Feel me within your soul
    I shall be always
    with you.
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  • (10/1/2008 7:00:00 PM)

    wow i wish i was capable of something like this but i'm not i was blown away by this poem....

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  • (8/27/2008 6:00:00 AM)

    Quite romantic and passionate, explores the kind of love that transcends beyond life after death! A 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 13, 2008

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