A Cupid And A Man Poem by Tareq Jalabi

A Cupid And A Man

Rating: 4.6


i always work to pay the loan
you only see me running or on the phone
i work all the time even at dawn
i have my money so I`m not alone
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you who live in loneliness
and have no time for cupid
if you keep living like this
then you must be stupid
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i eat when i have to and drink
i only wash up when i stink
working all day i cannot blink
i never have fun, but in my thoughts i sink
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you know what my fellow?
you actually need a shrink
or an arrow in your blue heart
to change it to pink
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you made us sad and moved emotions inus
so, by the power given to me by Venus
i throw the arrow of mercy at your heart
so living life you shall start

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you are full of meanings and thoughts..outstanding piece..well done!

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Ana Guerrero 13 March 2009

Wow I really love this one

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Brenda Arroyo 13 January 2009

I believe you... Everybody needs cupid: ]

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O Anna Niemus 12 January 2009

If the poem is autobiographical may God give you more free time to relax and do the work of your heart Thank you for rhyming stupid and Cupid!

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Melvina Germain 12 January 2009

Aln excellent write, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed the read, but I would like to read it again and again, thankyou.

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Saadat Tahir 07 September 2011

nice quartets interesting read :)

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Marcella D 28 February 2010

sounds so harsh, but strong of you 2 say that. it's better 2 be with the one you love.

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Julie Nixon 15 September 2009

I like the feeling in this poem - its hitting. I have put up another few of my poems. Please read & pass your comments!

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Surya . 27 August 2009

a beautiful imagery and beautiful poem.thanx for invitation voted10 surya

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Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

''you made us sad and moved emotions inus so, by the power given to me by Venus i throw the arrow of mercy at your heart so living life you shall start '' a nice poem 10++

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