I Will Love U Till.... - Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (6/14/2010 10:25:00 AM)

Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much
Ms. Nivedita
UK
10/10 (Report) Reply

Akram Awadat (10/1/2009 6:18:00 AM)

fantastic poem, well done
10+ (Report) Reply

The Understander (9/15/2009 7:56:00 PM)

Well written,10/10. (Report) Reply

Adriana C (9/11/2009 9:15:00 AM)

sensitive poem, love is so painful sometimes! (Report) Reply

Carol Gall (5/27/2009 8:08:00 AM)

you are a very good writer its from your heart (Report) Reply

Fatima Shahzad (5/26/2009 4:49:00 AM)

nice..nice.....wow...thts amazing! ! ! .. (Report) Reply

~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (4/14/2009 8:06:00 PM)

Some real powerful lines in there. Like the one about the train.
Impressive, unique, different writing style...i like it!
Scale1-10...10! (Report) Reply

Miriam Maia Padua (3/9/2009 8:36:00 PM)

wow...eternal love...
I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN
COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN
TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN
....and Christ; s pain will never cease.....so with your love....
very sweet expression of great love...
the words are so touching....
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Brenda Arroyo (1/13/2009 9:50:00 PM)

Amazing...
And to this I say AMEN!
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon (12/30/2008 8:50:00 PM)

A great poem filled with emotion! I enjoy reading it! (Report) Reply

Marria Attar (11/23/2008 11:23:00 AM)

Great Poem..full of love.. :) (Report) Reply

Nikki Clevenger (11/18/2008 8:39:00 PM)

I hear your pain and emotion in this very loudly, very nice poem (Report) Reply

Rachael Miroddi (9/23/2008 10:27:00 PM)

Your love poems are amazing and I can relate/identify with each and everyone of them.
I would really like to see you write about other subjects because I beleive expanding your thinking tends to be very helpful! ! !
I look forward to reading more from you, keep up the good work blue eyes! (Report) Reply

Tatianna Rei Moonshadow (8/30/2008 3:14:00 PM)

love is like that... painful... but the test of love is pain... if you're willing to endure agony, you know its for real (Report) Reply

Lourdes Schopenhauer (8/6/2008 5:51:00 PM)

I like the kitchiness. Its beat. If it was meant to be, I dont know, but it works and could just as well be made into a gigantic goldcrusted porcelain figure in my hidden town any day. Jeff Coons would have been translucentgreen with envy! (Report) Reply

Liliana Negoi (8/5/2008 1:54:00 PM)

interesting comparison here...the pain of your love is as deep as Christ's pain? ! :) (Report) Reply

Blessing Nanier (8/5/2008 12:14:00 PM)

it is soo. soo romantic (Report) Reply

Katherine Ng Li Hoon (8/2/2008 8:19:00 AM)

I enjoy this poem written by you.
Keep up your good work! (Report) Reply

Wadeema Ali (7/30/2008 6:47:00 AM)

perfect not only perfect excellent (Report) Reply