I Will Love U Till....

Rating: 4.0
I LOVE U AND THE PAIN
THAT U CAUSE INVAIN
THAT U BROUGHT TO MY HEART
AND MY HEART HAD TO OBTAIN
U CAN SAY IT AGAIN AND AGAIN
FOR LOVING U I AM INSANE
BECAUSE, DESPITE ALL THE PAIN
WHICH IS IMPOSSIBLE TO EXPLAIN
I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN
COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN
TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN
Wednesday, July 23, 2008
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COMMENTS
Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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Akram Awadat 01 October 2009
fantastic poem, well done 10+
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The Understander 15 September 2009
Well written,10/10.
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Adriana C 11 September 2009
sensitive poem, love is so painful sometimes!
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Carol Gall 27 May 2009
you are a very good writer its from your heart
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Fatima Shahzad 26 May 2009
nice..nice.....wow...thts amazing! ! ! ..
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Some real powerful lines in there. Like the one about the train. Impressive, unique, different writing style...i like it! Scale1-10...10!
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Miriam Maia Padua 09 March 2009
wow...eternal love... I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN ....and Christ; s pain will never cease.....so with your love.... very sweet expression of great love... the words are so touching.... 10++++
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Brenda Arroyo 13 January 2009
Amazing... And to this I say AMEN! : ]
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008
A great poem filled with emotion! I enjoy reading it!
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