I Will Love U Till.... Poem by Tareq Jalabi

I Will Love U Till....

Rating: 4.0


I LOVE U AND THE PAIN
THAT U CAUSE INVAIN
THAT U BROUGHT TO MY HEART
AND MY HEART HAD TO OBTAIN
U CAN SAY IT AGAIN AND AGAIN
FOR LOVING U I AM INSANE
BECAUSE, DESPITE ALL THE PAIN
WHICH IS IMPOSSIBLE TO EXPLAIN
I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN
COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN
TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lourdes Schopenhauer 06 August 2008

I like the kitchiness. Its beat. If it was meant to be, I dont know, but it works and could just as well be made into a gigantic goldcrusted porcelain figure in my hidden town any day. Jeff Coons would have been translucentgreen with envy!

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 30 August 2008

love is like that... painful... but the test of love is pain... if you're willing to endure agony, you know its for real

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Rachael Miroddi 23 September 2008

Your love poems are amazing and I can relate/identify with each and everyone of them. I would really like to see you write about other subjects because I beleive expanding your thinking tends to be very helpful! ! ! I look forward to reading more from you, keep up the good work blue eyes!

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Nikki Clevenger 18 November 2008

I hear your pain and emotion in this very loudly, very nice poem

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Great Poem..full of love.. :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 June 2010

Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Akram Awadat 01 October 2009

fantastic poem, well done 10+

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The Understander 15 September 2009

Well written,10/10.

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Adriana C 11 September 2009

sensitive poem, love is so painful sometimes!

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Carol Gall 27 May 2009

you are a very good writer its from your heart

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