I LOVE U AND THE PAIN
THAT U CAUSE INVAIN
THAT U BROUGHT TO MY HEART
AND MY HEART HAD TO OBTAIN
U CAN SAY IT AGAIN AND AGAIN
FOR LOVING U I AM INSANE
BECAUSE, DESPITE ALL THE PAIN
WHICH IS IMPOSSIBLE TO EXPLAIN
I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN
COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN
TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN
Some real powerful lines in there. Like the one about the train. Impressive, unique, different writing style...i like it! Scale1-10...10!
wow...eternal love... I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN ....and Christ; s pain will never cease.....so with your love.... very sweet expression of great love... the words are so touching.... 10++++
A great poem filled with emotion! I enjoy reading it!
Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice..nice.....wow...thts amazing! ! ! ..