I Will Love U Till.... Poem by Tareq Jalabi

I Will Love U Till....

Rating: 4.0


I LOVE U AND THE PAIN
THAT U CAUSE INVAIN
THAT U BROUGHT TO MY HEART
AND MY HEART HAD TO OBTAIN
U CAN SAY IT AGAIN AND AGAIN
FOR LOVING U I AM INSANE
BECAUSE, DESPITE ALL THE PAIN
WHICH IS IMPOSSIBLE TO EXPLAIN
I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN
COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN
TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Shahzad 26 May 2009

nice..nice.....wow...thts amazing! ! ! ..

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 14 April 2009

Some real powerful lines in there. Like the one about the train. Impressive, unique, different writing style...i like it! Scale1-10...10!

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 March 2009

wow...eternal love... I WILL LOVE U TILL THE TRAIN COMES TO MY SOUL AND BREAK ITS CHAIN TILL MY HEART FEELS NOMORE CHRIST`S PAIN ....and Christ; s pain will never cease.....so with your love.... very sweet expression of great love... the words are so touching.... 10++++

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Brenda Arroyo 13 January 2009

Amazing... And to this I say AMEN! : ]

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

A great poem filled with emotion! I enjoy reading it!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 14 June 2010

Fantasy love poem…jockeyed nicely…yea beloved will be yours always...i trust much Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Akram Awadat 01 October 2009

fantastic poem, well done 10+

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The Understander 15 September 2009

Well written,10/10.

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Adriana C 11 September 2009

sensitive poem, love is so painful sometimes!

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Carol Gall 27 May 2009

you are a very good writer its from your heart

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