Tareq Jalabi

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  • Sipho Khumalo (9/14/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    hi Big Boss

    I really thin you explored your twin towers and keep tyt and well as that you going far. Please comment on my poem and i will let you know if i have something new.

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  • Dian Hayati (11/25/2008 1:50:00 AM)

    ooww..u describe it simply n mature..love it!

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  • Jamie Simmons (7/20/2008 10:33:00 AM)

    I like how you play with the darker side of the emotion love. Most poets write about the overly mushy side of it, but you put the broken heart into a prespective that many other poets can't seem to get to.

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  • Vivian Pena (6/19/2008 11:45:00 PM)

    CRAZY LOVE is my fav its so emoish and has a dark twist which some what remind me of myself and the type of luv i have great job

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Best Poem of Tareq Jalabi

Ashes Of Love

Burn me to ashes
and throw them in the air
when you see flashes
to that area please stare
keep opening your eye-lashes
you may find me there
a piece of me might fly
and settle on your hair
but will you know me
will you be aware
or will you mix me
with the dirt of the air
***
say the naked truth
please do swear
to come to my grave
only if you care
then feel your own soul
and you will find mine there
tell me your feelings
your pain with me share
and then mixing souls
will be no longer rare

Read the full of Ashes Of Love

She

I`ve never cried
until she died
lying in bed
rolling from side to side
closing my eyes
i`m nothing but blind
no more rest
no more sleep
my soul is destroyed