I Shall Carry You In My Heart ♥ - Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I Shall Carry You In My Heart ♥ - Love

Rating: 5.0


Like those flames of the candles
Lambent, plummeting yet shining….

Like those pearls of the shells
Secretive, hidden yet waiting…….

Like those diamonds of the mines
Underground, below rocks yet precious

Like those fragrances of the flowers
Enticing, refreshing yet scintillating

Wherever I go, I promise
I shall carry you in my heart ♥♥♥

Monday, January 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 January 2019

Candles carry the flame with power of love to behold. We feel this truth. Still last breath candle holds flame in its lap. Love is like dazzling diamond and fragrant flower. We shall perceive importance of life. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thank u so much Kumarmani Ji.....Your comments means a lot to me.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 January 2019

lovely and sweet loving poem

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Thx Much my friend Mahtab

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Bipasha D 14 January 2019

Like those pearls of the shells Secretive, hidden yet waiting……. Like those diamonds of the mines Underground, below rocks yet precious Beautifully articulated, loved reading the poem.

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Tihama Hykam 20 March 2023

Best love couplets. Fabulous.

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Ricky Magnathen 01 May 2021

Like those pearls of the shells Secretive, hidden yet waiting…….

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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2021

Sublime piece....wonderful to read...

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2019

Five couplets, simplicity at its height of beauty. Lovely metaphors.

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 January 2019

This couplet poem has a beauty beyond words! It is one of those poems lovers want to hear, declaring their love for each other! Absolutely stunning!

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