I Shall Share The Winter Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Shall Share The Winter

Rating: 5.0


One,
Sometimes so hysterical and obstinate
that I leave someone alone in the room
and come in the adjacent room
where my personal computer
invites me to write a poem.
But what should I write?
The story of my life,
a story of all the seasons,
pleasant winds of the early springs
colorful flowers of the late springs
moon lit nights of the summer
showers of the rains, no sun, no moon,
but the one,
always with me.
Firmly standing as a brave tree in autumn!
Now it's winter,
And I have left one alone in the room!
I listen to one's coughing.
Leaving this poem incomplete
I am going to one to share the winter
I think one needs a glass of water.

Tuesday, January 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joan Cocks 30 January 2018

I love this approach dear poet.

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Joy Johnson 30 January 2018

well if I didn't know any better that one coughing was me ha ha nice poem

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 January 2018

True love makes the winter a spring.

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Loke Kok Yee 31 January 2018

You left me coughing there! Looking forward to share winter with you. For sure the one is more important than the poem, Thank you sir for the reminder.

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Rini Shibu 31 January 2018

It's a complete piece of winter.. Nicely written

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Indira Renganathan 05 February 2018

A good soul can never forget such a brave supportive tree at all...and you are a good soul..I amaze at your poetic skill Akhtar....kudos

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Valsa George 02 February 2018

Lovely.........! I savor the taste of sweet marital bliss here, also feel your loving consideration for the great 'tree' (rooted firmly in your life, giving you shade and shelter! (10)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2018

A one of a kind piece beautifully and uniquely crafted. Lovingly penned for someone who needs a glass of water. Loved the last part.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

A sweet poem......showers of the rains, no sun, no moon, but the one, always with me......Loved reading it....10

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 31 January 2018

This the poet did.Interesting write.A nice poem.

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