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I shot an arrow in the air,
It hit a drug dealer in the head.
A hollow victory I do despair,
It did not kill him outright dead.

Shaun Cronick

Thursday, May 14, 2020

Topic(s) of this poem: satire

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 May 2020

A wonderful and powerful thought. Great satire in a wonderful form. Drug dealers are menace to society. They destroy the future of the Youth. Great poem with a meaningful message.

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Shaun Cronick 14 May 2020

Well said Rose Marie and I concur thanks for your great comment and salutations again to your good self on your fine poem A Horse On The Loose, being chosen as today's Member Poem of the Day. I thank you so much and stay blessed Rose Marie.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 May 2020

A well crafted quatrain. Simply amazing.....10+++

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Shaun Cronick 14 May 2020

Thank you Bernard for your kind and generous comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thank you again and stay well sir.

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