I Too Need You … Poem by Sandhya S.N

really fantastic and have a deep emotion on your poem which also touch my heart

Your words strum the heart's cord. Very lovely, Sandhya

Love is much needed to live in these times of strife and hatred. Keep on submitting your words. Best Wishes Naseer

Don't let the critisizers get you down I love your writing it's cute and moving. Don't say you hate them then you will be a hater a hater of the haters which will push you further to nonexistence.

that's a lovely write..to whom it meant to be..its a nice verses for that person...good write...

So Beautifully written, Your emotions flow so nicely through your writings.

emotions flow freely from your heart and find a way in PH...........

we too need you here sandhya! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice poem loved it given 10

beautiful piece, thanks for sharing

Well, punctuation problems and improper use of U for the word you aside, Sandhya, this is a fine poem. When have you ever read a poem in a book that had two or three or more exclamation marks after the last word in a line? And you will not see the word you as U in a book of poetry either. Once you overcome these problems, you have the talent to be a fine poet, for poetic feeling is in your words, not your U's or overabundant exclamation points. Carl.