I Walk, You Walk Poem by Lyn Paul

I Walk, You Walk

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I walk, you walk
Step by step
At ease we stroll
A new road taken
We now accept

Living is reality
We make decisions
On what we believe

The decisions we make
Are sometimes wrong
Life takes it toll
On where we belong

But this is life
I am who I am
You are you
Day is day
Night is night
Sometimes wrong but mostly right

So we can't change anything
Just walk each step
I walk, You walk
Hard it can be
Yet what we will gain
Is realty

So walk, Don't run
You will see 'The Yellow Brick Road'
You will see
That you can share your load

We must laugh
We must see the funny
Laughing is everything
More valuable than money

I walk, You walk
Share the load
At ease we stroll,
There is no Highway To Hell.....
But; ..There is always... a new road



Copyright June 2014
Lyn Paul

Wednesday, June 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life,believe,hope,inspiration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 25 June 2014

Very rightly you said, so long we are alive we cannot or shouldn't sit tight and inactive. We have to walk on and have to try to excel upon. Ultimately we have no control and don't know the destiny still we have to walk on for a greener day ahead.

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Very simple yet powerful as it contains the truth..........Lyn..........very nicely composed..........I am impressed........

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Valerie Dohren 26 June 2014

Life is indeed a difficult road to follow, but as you say Lyn, laughter will ease the way. A good, philosophical write.

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Hazel Durham 28 June 2014

I felt I was walking along the road too, with lovely rhythm and flow, life can change by taking a new road and with a good sense of humour we can withstand our mistakes! Beautiful write Lyn!

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Ken E Hall 29 June 2014

Yes walking on the road of life can be daunting and you explain the way so eloquently...yes we make mistakes but a smile will travel a mile...I want to spend and dance this poem is a helping hand Lyn...regards

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Sandra Feldman 20 August 2014

It is easy to take good advice when it is so beautifully and poetically written. Thanks for the wonderful advice, You and your poems, Always extra nice. Hey poets, run don't walk, When it's our friend Lyn, Who you hear talk.

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Neela Nath Das 19 August 2014

I walk, You walk Share the load At ease we stroll, There is no Highway To Hell..... But; ..There is always... a new road- - - A new hope, a new path.Every line is a gem.

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To walk is to live and to live is to walk. Powerful perspective my friend!

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Valsa George 09 July 2014

A life of sharing accepting each as he/ she is results in joyful companionship! Knowing well that the road ahead is not quite smooth, when they take step by step, there are no great disappointments. A great poem!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 July 2014

delight of life is in sharing, so well crafted this truth Lyn.

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