I'D Love To..... Poem by Lyn Paul

I'D Love To.....

Rating: 4.9


I'D Love to know my dying day So I could plan my life
I'd love to travel, I'd love to roam, I'd love to steer from strife
I'd love to know what's right for me and what roads to not take
I'd love to know what friends to choose to avoid those who are fake
I'd love to know what trees to grow so I could feed the world
I'd love to cure the evil and make the sick be healed
I'd love to eat just what I'd want and not gain a pound
I'd love to get lost occasionally and know I can be found

All in all...
I love to love and to know the importance of living
I'd love to know that the whole world knows
The whole meaning of giving








Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Tuesday, August 27, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: giving,inspiration,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 August 2013

To know the importance of living And the meaning of giving. Beautiful message delivered through a nicely composed poem. Thank you.

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David Wood 28 August 2013

A lovely poem Lyn, we have to live each day as it comes and love and be aware of the beauty of nature all around.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

A beautiful poem to know the meanings of life..loved it.

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Heather Wilkins 30 August 2013

great thoughts Lyn. but we must face life and look for all the answers

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

'All in all I love to love and to know the importance of living I'd love to know that the whole world knows the whole meaning of giving ' A deep thought. Makes one ponder over the purpose of life. Thanks for this beautiful piece, like any other of yours!

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Shahzia Batool 04 September 2013

you have displayed a remarkable energy in this poem, Lyn...nice to read! ! !

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Valsa George 02 September 2013

Longings of a heart that yearns for love and wishes to see the entire humanity bonded in brotherhood! 'If the world had known the beauty of selfless giving'! ! What a wonderful thought! ! Enjoyed! !

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Danny Draper 01 September 2013

Dreams and aspirations to live and share for a better world, a truely great list from which we all could benefit.

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Hazel Durham 01 September 2013

I love this beautiful poem if only we knew the future and the changes we would then make!

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