Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

I Want (Erotic)

Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

I want you to forget all else
except the scent of intoxication
the feel of sensuality, while I
lavish your body, with my mouth
with my love, with my wet sex
that announces the arrivals and departures
of your presence.

I want to be copper-ed dust.
to lay upon you, in fine layers
and experience sudden fulfillment
in the way you consummate a kiss,
and me, all at once.

I want you buried inside
chained in my cave
by force of muscle and desire
so my passion can settle on you
its residue trailing down your body
invading your soul.

I want you lost, in the mists of heady feelings
drawn by the siren cries of my heart,
while you call my name
in gasped whispers…
love caught in your throat.

Comments about I Want (Erotic) by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 1:53:00 AM)

    Sensual poem....................(Report)Reply

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  • Jon Lloyd (12/12/2006 5:22:00 AM)

    Heady, intoxicating, delicious.


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  • Indiscreet Episode (12/11/2006 10:52:00 AM)

    This is most certainly erotic. It makes me suddenly want to call my special someone in the middle of the day with desperate pleas for attention.(Report)Reply

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  • Alice Vedral RiveraAlice Vedral Rivera (12/11/2006 10:39:00 AM)

    Hot and sensual with a touch of tenderness - awesome write!


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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 8, 2010