I wanted to write a poem
Wanted to tell a tale
But knew not how to rhyme
No words I could avail
I looked toward the sky
Said a heartfelt prayer
God said: ‘Open your eye
And see my creations rare'
I thanked him and looked around
To feel the flowing waters
To read the blowing wind
To see the mist and mounts
The bright beauteous flowers
The sweet swimming fish
The cute flying birds
Grass so green and lush
The starlets and the moon
That glitter in the sky
Oh God! These are Thy boon
The morn and milky rays
All these I can see
All things I can feel
All I can write
And sing songs with zeal
All these seem to sing
Songs my heart unheard,
Words so muse so long,
That makes my mind revered
A poet and his heart
Can never rest or sleep
Oh God! Thanks a lot
Thy wealth, a precious heap!
27 03 08
my poems usually dont rhyme - but when i put a comment on your poems it rhymes and that is your magic- yet another magical picture- thank you and thank god-10
A WONDERFUL POEM. NATURE IS THE INSPIRATION OF ALL POETS. ITS A GREAT TEACHER, Kesav very easy flowing write 10
Subjectivation of surrounding objects is equal to poetry and add pinch of exalted –true-viewed-vibe’ makes poetry great…and Sir here you made it… 10+hf Ms. Nivedita UK
A true blessing of God. I think Its nature, the main creative force, that sprinkles poetry. I can say this poem a prelude to poetry. Deserves 10 as always the most of your poems, Kesav. Best Regards Naseer
a true feel before starting to write poems.......thanks for share...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beauty is always enhanced when meshed with truth...as you have done with this poem. Will put this in my faves. Thanks!