I was walking in yesterday
Wraiths and city nights knew me
I walked far on into the past and then
The complexity of that endless road came across to me
...
Read full text
Lovely picture of day dreaming, just remember life is now. Bob
' was walking in yesterday As if yesterday was today And as though the past was alive' An enigma---lovely +10 regards anjali
Such a stress free occupation, thanx for taking me with you regards Tom 10+
Wraiths and city limits- indicate life of the bewildering recent past…the mind wandering aimlessly- no map no location- and recollecting only a bit sweetness, not of much worth to remember- notice the casual way of mentioning of the friend and the way side wine stall…but what actually quenches the thirst of the wandering mind is the cold village well water- a glaring contradiction to the wine symbol…and the mind finally realizing that the present also is not any different either… A poem impressive by its enigmatic elusive presentation style…a very good one, the way I read 10+
Walking yestarday bring s you to today still we can hope to reach tomorrow and goes on and on.......... Very philosphical poem.........
A poem with several classical allusions....one of the best sathya narayana
Wonderful title and concept and so the execution, with a very good rhythm. I like it! Regards, onelia
Lady that was a beautiful write, the content was excellent top marks for you my friend 10 Chris x
this is very cool... nice images. I walked into yesterday and it was the friend Whose name I couldn't recall; it was the wanderer's wine Bought at a wayside stall good lines. you have done a fine job with this. an enjoyable read. good job. Crystal