Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 91,230 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

I Wish I Had Been Born A Bird...[personal; Birds; Humor] - Poem by Bri Edwards

My parents were both humans, so I am human too,
but I'd wish to be a bird, if I could be born anew.
Though I 'love' birds, you may think my wish absurd.
But more absurd wishes I'm sure you have heard.

Of course I'm not a bird and never will be.
But if I could talk to birds I could better see
if the life of a bird would really satisfy me.
Eating seeds and bugs and such, and sitting in a tree.

My bird of choice? How would I pick a winner?
Not a penguin, who has to dress for dinner.
Not an ostrich, another flightless bird.
And a strutting peacock might just be absurd.
Perhaps an eagle, soaring high above you,
or a hummingbird, acrobat of the blue.
Or perhaps a mighty swan swimming gracefully,
or a nightingale whistling a concert, free.

For certain I would not choose a caged-life,
though, uncaged, dangers for me might be rife.
I think I'd prefer fresh-kill to old road kill,
and a nest in tree rather than on window sill.

If a bird, I'd not have had to deal with military draft.
Or had others think sometimes that I am daft.
All sorts of human signs and laws I could spurn.
And there'd be no reason to file a tax return.
I'd have no need to wear or ever change diapers,
no need to get gas or change windshield wipers,
no need for lawyers or too many teachers,
no need to listen to rehashing preachers,
no need to plan for death or watch my cholesterol.
As a bird I'd just have to listen to Mother Nature's call.

(September 2009)

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I do love birds, though people are ok also. I wrote this over two days in 2009 and edited it tonight in May of 2012. It's really what I believe. And my parents were indeed human. Darn.

Comments about I Wish I Had Been Born A Bird...[personal; Birds; Humor] by Bri Edwards

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/17/2017 6:19:00 AM)

    Birds live for a few years only whereas man can live till 100 years. Man has 6 senses while birds have only 2 or 3 senses. Birds go by their instincts but human beings go by their power of choice, good or bad. Yet your poem
    is nicely composed.
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  • (7/15/2017 3:38:00 PM)

    I liked it. I liked a lot. I found it like a your desire to be free and experience the freedom that a bird experiences. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Wes Vogler (12/4/2015 8:41:00 PM)

    nICE READ bRI TA AN 8 ***Caps Lock aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 1, 2012

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