If I should see you again
Across some busy city street
If I should see your face as I've longed to
For years, for so many years
Will I just stand there stupidly
My face wet with tears?
But wait, there's more to come.
I'll probably just stand and watch
You walking swiftly from sight.
If I could have my freedom and words-
And I no longer want to be so weak:
Then I would probably find my courage and speak.
what a pleasing read, love the structure and feeling, topten i say
Rani-i interpret your poem this way; one partner is waiting for the other eagerly; other never minds it and leaves; the waiting one finds the real self and gets back the original form......with this meaning i like to share that one way love is painful and it is better to be away from such love...great
Beautiful! I can actually feel the ambience in this poem of yours! ! Marvelous i say! !
If only how many times have I said that to myself lovely write 10 Chris
take a decision soon! for he is planning a visit over there...and you would see him again... sleek gentle and expressive poetry...
'Then I would find my courage and speak, '.....and maybe not! Please read my poem 'My Son.' Thanks.
As an addendum, and correction to my previous post....poem's titled was changed to read 'My Son.' Sorry. Thanks
Only if it's meant to be my friend! Should it be 'carpe diem', or leave it be? An excellent work. Thanks. PS: Please read my poem 'Old Flame.'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Has a nice flow and I like the word 'probably' in the final line.