If You Ever Loved Me, Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

If You Ever Loved Me,

Rating: 4.7


Stab me with a dagger
Over my wounded heart
And crush my fragile mind
With your cruel words,
If you relish it for a momment;
For I'm not doing any atrocities
Unto your peaceful life......
For I'm loving your heart
By my every breath
In my every inch of the Soul.
Stab me then with a dagger,
If you relish it for a momment.
Oh! you were ever such a beautiful girl,
When I loved you.....
Oh! you were ever such a beautiful girl,
When you loved me.....
Each day seemed to us same
When we loved each other.
No other girls was there as beautiful as you!
No other girls was there as beautiful as you!

I don't want to love you anymore,
Nor I wish to be in your side again
As I hate a person who avoids my life.
But I loved her in my whole heart and soul,
When she was longed only for me.

Friday, January 6, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emelia Pattson 10 January 2012

NICE POEM TRUE EXP; OF BROKEN HEART

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Asif Andalib 10 January 2012

Very good poem! Thanks for sharing!

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Dead Rose 09 January 2012

your heart's pain is well expressed, , good poem, ,10******* Rose

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Anvita . 09 January 2012

Wonderful... A pain expressed... Pain of a heart which truly loved and truly crushed!

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Anvita . 09 January 2012

Wonderful expressions... and how true for a heart which truly loved... and truly crushed.

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Sylvia Lukeman 22 January 2012

A powerfully worded poem of lost love, Deeply moving to read of your anguish leading to you to deep anger. A memorable poem. You are welcome to visit mine

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Anhelica Velasquez 19 January 2012

great write, nice use of your chanelled emotions

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Rajendran Muthiah 18 January 2012

Love the one who has been longing for you. But why should you hate the one who is not pulled towards you? The line, 'stab me...dagger' recalls me the lines of Shakespeare's tragedies. Cheers! There is a violent sea of emotions!

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Ency Bearis 18 January 2012

great piece, eloquently written

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan 12 January 2012

dagger on a wound! tearing ideas Vipins ! good one

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