If you want— then go
I am not sitting on roads
Like barricades
Purplish breeze touching azure sky
Aroma of fine arts walking
Flowers blooming from ring tone
Your clamorous pictures
Calling from cell’s memory card
I am butterfly on your heart
If you want— then go
I am not sitting on roads
Like barricades
Ahhh Love sweet Love, when it's gone one can only let go and hope....again great write
A good poem to live, giving freedom to a person is very hard, yet, sometimes we have to accept that if we love someone..we set him free.
where to go sitting no as barricades........ you have catchy write yet we may not go away crossing the barricades........ beautifully penned from other angle.......
WHAT IF, AFTER READING THIS MOVING PIECE, IT DECIDES NOT TO GO! AND LIKE A BUTTERFLY, - TRIES TO SIT ON THE BARRICADE'S DOOR? ! 10! -Raj Nandy
hmm...i think that one doesn't really wanted to go...maybe just waiting for the butterfly's heart to soften a little. enjoyable read! : -)
wow what a wonderful creation! ! ! ! i can picture in my mind the brilliant images you have here...thanks best regards, jdh
''Purplish breeze touching azure sky Aroma of fine arts walking Flowers blooming from ring tone'' This double visual metaphor, that consists of tangibility between visual and sonorous fields suggests the feelings that are generated by waiting a call.''Flowers blooming'' means the renaissance of the feelings.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If you want-then go..... what a heart felt composition! You express your love by askink your beloved to GO! !