If You Want— Then Go Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

If You Want— Then Go



If you want— then go
I am not sitting on roads
Like barricades

Purplish breeze touching azure sky
Aroma of fine arts walking
Flowers blooming from ring tone

Your clamorous pictures
Calling from cell’s memory card
I am butterfly on your heart

If you want— then go
I am not sitting on roads
Like barricades

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 29 June 2009

If you want-then go..... what a heart felt composition! You express your love by askink your beloved to GO! !

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 28 June 2009

Ahhh Love sweet Love, when it's gone one can only let go and hope....again great write

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LOVEFOOL Aka 28 June 2009

What is is what is, what will be will be nice work

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Susan Aparejo 28 June 2009

A good poem to live, giving freedom to a person is very hard, yet, sometimes we have to accept that if we love someone..we set him free.

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rago rago 28 June 2009

where to go sitting no as barricades........ you have catchy write yet we may not go away crossing the barricades........ beautifully penned from other angle.......

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Raj Nandy 01 July 2009

WHAT IF, AFTER READING THIS MOVING PIECE, IT DECIDES NOT TO GO! AND LIKE A BUTTERFLY, - TRIES TO SIT ON THE BARRICADE'S DOOR? ! 10! -Raj Nandy

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a beautiful sweet writing..loved it

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Smiley Hooker 30 June 2009

hmm...i think that one doesn't really wanted to go...maybe just waiting for the butterfly's heart to soften a little. enjoyable read! : -)

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wow what a wonderful creation! ! ! ! i can picture in my mind the brilliant images you have here...thanks best regards, jdh

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Marieta Maglas 29 June 2009

''Purplish breeze touching azure sky Aroma of fine arts walking Flowers blooming from ring tone'' This double visual metaphor, that consists of tangibility between visual and sonorous fields suggests the feelings that are generated by waiting a call.''Flowers blooming'' means the renaissance of the feelings.10

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