Immortality Poem by Sandra Feldman

Immortality



When I die,
Said the poet
To his love,
Your love,
Will go with me
To wherever,
I shall be,
Your love,
The only thing
I ever wanted
The only treasure,
I ever had,
I will take it
With me,
For your love
Is, you see,
My immortality.

Monday, January 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: forever,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 08 January 2019

Love is the only road to immortality. Beautiful poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 January 2019

A heartwarming poem, dear Sandra.........................................

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Bill Cantrell 07 January 2019

Love overpowers death, but immortality? By no means, for the possibility of a departure into death brings a soberness to love, your treasure lies in your hands...upon the page, and in the hearts of others. A very powerful poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2019

Death does not break the power of love. Love is revived time to time. We feel and beautify life with divine love. An interesting and valuable poem is powerfully penned.

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