Their candles blow away
Their memories we hold
Decades after they go
River of Persistence
Determination!
Great meditation
Flows within their blood
Only a few were meant
For eternal greatest
Hundreds of soul have tried
Many jawbones fall short
Only souls that hunger!
To reach perfection
Or has a heart of fire
Only the ones that are
Driven with passion
Like a raging lion
Has the force to break
Adversity's teeth
They alone will fall
In the pool of greatest
And will be remember
As Immortalize men!
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hey Eyan.. strong revolutaionary stuff there been looking at CHE G's pic lately but very nice and potent lines...convet the message loud an clear you acn be proud of this piece...its a tenner cheers
Only great people think great, speak and do great things in the world and their works only immortalise them in the heart of future generations in the world! Men like lion-hearted Richards as more or less depicted in your poem will surely remain immortal in the world!
Overflowing feelings from heart and mind. Literally perfect and strong write.
i loved it that how o feel that was deep can you do the same for my poems thx
this poem has a power to inspire people... really beautiful and interesting... yet i was truly intregued by the title and the way you mentioned the title at the last.... very impressive... i liked it infact loved it...10+++
Immortality is a power to hold with greatness and humility under the viel of divinity...fabulous piece.10+++
Human being existence is only a blow in the cosmic eternity.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
every body wants to be immortal not by world standards but by their own..each one's conscience speaks nothing else but that