Immovable man
You are the obstacle of action
You are the old life and a obstruction
To which you follow, the ways of sin
In me you crave my submission
To God, I want to follow
Yet you always insist, 'follow the shadow'
How you are immovable!
How I need to move!
Inside, you make me miserable!
Each day, like a screech out of reach!
Me and you are one
Even God pity's my immovable life!
You keep me every day away from a new life!
I ask God yet, he needs my sacrifice!
The sacrifice of him who is immovable!
Yet he is a wall in my heart
An old man, must be no more!
The new man must be!
Yet stubborn this one, in me
How then will one move?
With a man who is immovable!
Meditate...and you will find your answer! Great poem, Kevin!
Great thoughts to ponder about. A wonderful poem.
We are endowed with a gift of reason. We must choose which is best for us. We must not be immobilized with something we don't want to be. We also have our right/ freedom to choose.
True. It is difficult to move with such heaviness inside. Your poem made my thoughts fly high
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This line 'Yet you always insist, 'follow the shadow''; I found very interesting, decades ago I wrote a long poem about following shadow; memories stirred.